Thursday, November 12, 2009

!!!

Rumble, mumble, toss and tumble!
Up and down, and came around,
this silly drop of water that sang
a song that cheered the gloom!
It screamed and squeaked,
merrily danced and leaped!
Across the oceans, across the sea,
It waded through all, to be free,
but found that it was bound!
Oh, silly hound! Silly, silly hound!
Rotund and stupid, just like cupid,
with an aim to cheer, drink some beer,
and loaf around with a ready dart,
to pierce my heart, O my dear heart!
Bounded from cloud to cloud,
get a life, for cryin' out loud!
You imbecile mutt, don't you strut,
and make a fool of yourself!
Don't let go of yourself! DON'T!
Bam! Thud! Crash! Boom!
There you go, I broke you.
And now I dance to triumph!
A little jerk, a little step!
A little sway, a little shake!
La-la-la!
Cringe as you may!
Not a care in the world,
None at all!

9 comments:

  1. Haha, lot of onomatopoeia, so unlike you, and u tried to rhyme, pretty good! 'Cringe as you may! Not a care in the world, None at all!'! Carefree!

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  2. Thanks, Ashok. I did try rhyming. :P

    Haha! Yes. '!!!!' kind of explains everything!

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  3. Weird as it may sound, the poem sounds hollow, despite it being a poem about nothing. Lay off rhyme, or conversely, work on it.

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  4. you know..this is the kind of writing i like..apparent gibberish..but the gibberish stops at "APPARENT".;).very NICE.:)

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  5. wait.its not even apparent gibberish.sweet!.:O

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